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Grade 8: Module 1: Unit 1: Lesson 5
Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
GRADE 8: MODULE 1: UNIT 1: LESSON 5
Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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I can analyze how specific dialogue or incidents in a plot propel the action, reveal aspects of a character, or provoke a decision. (RL.8.3)
I can cite text-based evidence that provides the strongest support for my analysis of literary text. (RL.8.1)
I can determine the meaning of words and phrases in literary text (figurative, connotative, and technical meanings). (RL.8.4)
I can analyze the impact of word choice on meaning and tone (analogies or allusions). (RL.8.4)
I can use evidence from literary texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. (W.8.9)
Supporting Learning Targets
Ongoing Assessment
I can make inferences that deepen my understanding of Inside Out & Back Again.
I can analyze how critical incidents in the novel reveal aspects of Ha’s character.
I can cite evidence from the text in my writing that supports my analysis.
I can participate in discussions about the text with a partner, small group, and the whole class.
QuickWrite 2 (from homework)
Mid-Unit Assessment: Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Agenda
Teaching Notes
1. Opening
A. Engaging the Reader: Gallery Walk about
“Who Is Ha?” (10 minutes)
B. Review Learning Targets (3 minutes)
2. Work Time
A. Mid-Unit 1 Assessment: Getting to Know a
Character: What Details in the Text Help Us
Understand Ha? (30 minutes)
3. Closing and Assessment
A. Debrief (2 minutes)
4. Homework
A. Read pages 2241 and keep adding details
about Ha to your notes
In the opening of this lesson, students revisit the “Who Is Ha?” Small Group Anchor Charts they created
during Lesson 4. This helps prepare them for the upcoming assessment, by both activating their background
knowledge and seeing models of how their peers are inferring about Ha based on evidence from the text.
In advance: post students’ “Who Is Ha?” Anchor Charts around the room.
Post learning targets on the board.
Review: Gallery Walk (Appendix 1). Consider adjusting the protocol and posting it, so that the expectations
can be clearly presented to all students.
Consider using a visible timer for the Gallery Walk, based on the needs of your students.
This is an “open book” assessment: students will need their texts, and may use their journals, QuickWrites,
and the anchor charts posted around the room.
The assessment in this lesson may require more time for students, especially if they struggle with writing.
Consider your school schedule and the needs of your students and arrange for a time, if possible, when
students can finish.
Consider which students might need access to the Vocabulary Guide for this lesson to support their acquisition
of text. Because the homework for this lesson includes an independent first-read of text, there is also a
separate glossary of Additional Words from Assigned Reading. The glossary can be provided during an
additional support class in advance, with time to pre-teach the words, or modified to be used by students
independently (see supporting materials).
Consider the assessment data collected from this first assessment as a “baseline” for your students’ capacity to
use evidence from text to support their thinking (W.8.9).
For homework, students do a “first read” of pages 22-41, which they address in more depth during Lesson 8.
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Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Lesson Vocabulary
Materials
historical fiction, evidence (review); do
not preview vocabulary from the text
for the assessment
Who Is Ha? Anchor Chart (from Lesson 4; student-created in their small groups)
Sticky notes (three per student)
Markers (four per group)
Inside Out & Back Again (book; one per student)
QuickWrite model (from Lesson 3)
Mid-Unit 1 Assessment: Getting to Know a Character: What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha? (one per student)
Mid-Unit 1 Assessment: Getting to Know a Character: What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha? (Answers for
Teacher Reference)
2 point rubric: writing from sources/short response (for teacher reference to score students’ assessments)
Visible timer (as needed, see teacher notes)
Optional Materials
Vocabulary Guides
Opening
Meeting Students’ Needs
A. Engaging the Reader: Gallery Walk about “Who Is Ha?” (10 minutes)
Note: Post students’ anchor charts around the classroom in advance.
Show students the Who Is Ha? Anchor Charts that they created in their small groups during Lesson 4.
Briefly review the Gallery Walk protocol. Tell students that the purpose is to quickly see others’ thinking. Post the purpose for
student reference:
* “What additional details did other groups gather about Ha and her situation?”
Distribute sticky notes to each student. Tell students that they will look at the other charts and jot down, on their sticky
notes, aspects of Ha’s character, and the evidence the other groups have used. They will then get to add these sticky notes to
their own small-group charts. Encourage group members to split into two pairs, and pair-up with their partners to look at as
many different charts as possible.
Students may benefit from having
the directions for this activity
posted as “do now” when they
arrive in class.
Some students might benefit from
having posted expectations for the
Gallery Walk.
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Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Review class norms as needed to ensure that students will be able to circulate to look at one another’s charts in a quiet and
respectful manner. Based on the needs of your students, you may want to use a visible timer to help students do this quickly.
Begin the Gallery Walk: give students just 5 minutes to walk around, read other groups’ charts, and jot their notes. Tell them
that this thinking will help prepare them for their upcoming assessment.
Then ask students to gather with their own small group next to their own anchor chart. Ask students to share the new details
from their sticky notes.
Give each group markers, and encourage them to add to their anchor chart. Specifically ask that each pair add one new piece
of evidence from the text to their chart.
As students work in their small groups, circulate to listen in and give support as needed. Praise students who are actively
looking back in the novel for additional details. Remind them that close readers pay attention to details as they read and think
about why those details are important. Commend students for finding specific evidence from the texts to support their
thinking.
Also listen for a few strong examples when students refer to specific details from the novel that reveal Ha’s character. Prepare
to share these strong examples during the review of learning targets, during Opening Part B.
Consider pairing students
heterogeneously to provide a
collaborative and supportive
structure for discussion.
Circulating teachers and aides
should gently encourage struggling
students to use their glossaries as
needed throughout the lesson.
B. Review Learning Targets (3 minutes)
Have learning targets posted for review. Remind students that learning targets help students know the learning, thinking, and
skills that will be the focus of the lesson, and that the learning targets will always be reviewed and checked at the end of the
lesson.
Invite a series of student volunteers to read aloud each of the first three targets, as the other students read along.
* I can make inferences that deepen my understanding of Inside Out & Back Again.
* I can analyze how critical incidents in the novel reveal aspects of Ha’s character.
* I can cite evidence from the text in my writing that supports my analysis.
Students should recognize these targets. Share, either aloud or posted on the board, strong examples of details gathered
during Opening Part A. Tell students that they will be able to use these details during today’s assessment.
* I can participate in discussions about the text with a partner, small group, and the whole class.
Students should recognize that this is a repeat from previous lessons.
Consider providing nonlinguistic
symbols (e.g., two people talking
for discuss, a pen for record, a
magnifying glass for details, a light
bulb for main idea) to assist ELLs
in making connections with
vocabulary. (See supporting
materials, Lesson 1, for examples).
Some students may benefit from
referring to the Lesson
Vocabulary Guide.
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Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Work Time
Meeting Students’ Needs
A. Mid-Unit 1 Assessment: Getting to Know a Character: What Details in the Text Help Us Understand
Ha? (30 minutes)
For the assessment, consider rearranging seats so students are not in their groups. Be sure students have the following
materials:
* a pen or pencil
* Inside Out & Back Again
* the QuickWrite model (from Lesson 3)
Distribute the Mid-Unit 1 Assessment: Getting to Know a Character: What Details in the Text Help Us
Understand Ha? Read the directions aloud as students read in their heads:
Reassure students that they have been practicing reading the novel, and learning about Ha’s character from the words and
phrases the author uses. They will just be putting this learning into their own writing.
Remind students of some of the reading and writing skills they have been learning that will help them on this assessment:
Read for the gist: what is your initial sense of what the text is mostly about?
Think about the questions.
Reread the text with the questions in mind. Look for details.
Write your answers, using specific evidence from the text to support your thinking.
If time permits, distribute or display the 2-Point Rubric for Writing From Sources/Short Response, and review the
criteria for the assessment.
Give students 25 minutes to complete the assessment.
Students who finish early may reread earlier portions of the novel, revisit “The Vietnam Wars” article (if it was previewed
during Lesson 4), or read in their independent reading books for this unit.
Collect assessments from students. Tell them that they will keep practicing close reading and citing evidence in lessons to
come.
For this assessment, provide
appropriate accommodations (i.e.,
extra time) for ELLs and students
with special needs.
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Mid-Unit Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Closing and Assessment
Meeting Students’ Needs
A. Debrief (2 minutes)
Preview the homework with students.
Review the learning targets with the class. Ask students how they thought they did in terms of understanding Ha’s character
and connecting details from the book to what they noticed. Students can respond with a Fist to Five.
Homework
Meeting Students’ Needs
Complete a first reading of pages 2241, from “Unknown Father” through “Promises.” Keep noticing what the critical
incidents and key details are helping us learn about Ha. Use your journal to record your notes.
Note: Review students’ QuickWrite 2. Identify a strong example to show (at the start of Lesson 6) as an exemplar of
supporting ideas with evidence from text. Seek the student’s permission in advance to share his/her work. Be prepared to
highlight how the author of the model uses specific details to support his or her ideas and the way this student has woven
evidence into his or her paragraph.
Review students’ Mid-Unit Assessments. Provide specific feedback; time is allocated in Lesson 9 to share this feedback with
students.
Consider which students might
need access to the Additional
Words from the Assigned
Reading in the Vocabulary Guide
(see supporting materials).
If your school schedule allows it,
consider arranging for separate
support periods to provide
additional assistance to struggling
readers and writers for these
assignments, appropriate to the
needs of the students.
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Supporting Materials
GRADE 8: MODULE 1: UNIT 1: LESSON 5
Mid-Unit 1 Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Name:
Date:
Directions:
Read “Birthday Wishes” (pages 3031).
Think about the questions.
Reread the text with the questions in mind. Look for details.
Write your answers, using specific evidence from the text to support your thinking.
1. In the first line of the poem, Ha says, “Wishes I keep to myself.” What can you infer about Ha’s
character based on this phrase?
2. In the sixth stanza of the poem, Ha says,
“Wish Mother would stop
chiding me to stay calm,
which makes it worse.”
Part A: What do you think the word chiding means in this context?
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Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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Part B: What evidence in the text helped you figure this out?
3. In stanza 8, Ha writes, “Wish Father would come home.” What two reasons does Ha give for this
wish? Cite specific details from the text to support your answer.
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Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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4. Ha writes of seven wishes.
Part A: Based on these seven wishes, and other things you know about Ha, which of the following
best describes her character?
a. She selfishly wishes for things to make her happy.
b. She is a complex character who wishes for both childlike and serious things.
c. Her wishes show that she wants to please others.
d. She is unrealistic and just wishes for impossible things.
Part B: Cite specific details from the text to support your answer in Question 4, Part A.
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Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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5. Who is Ha? Based on this poem, “Birthday Wishes,” and one other poem you have read so far in the
novel, describe Ha as a character: her traits, values, or beliefs. Write a paragraph in which you
explain your current understanding of Ha, using specific evidence from the text of both poems to
support your analysis. You may use your journal, your book, QuickWrite 1, and the “Who Is Ha?”
Anchor Charts posted in the room to support your answer. Be sure to indicate the title of the second
poem (as well as any other poems you choose) in your response.
Answer the prompt completely
Provide relevant and complete evidence
Paragraph includes the following:
* A focus statement
* At least three pieces of specific evidence from the text
* For each piece of evidence, an analysis or explanation: what does this evidence mean?
* A concluding sentence
GRADE 8: MODULE 1: UNIT 1: LESSON 5
Mid-Unit 1 Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
(Answers for Teacher Reference)
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Directions:
Read “Birthday Wishes” (pages 3031).
Think about the questions.
Reread the text with the questions in mind. Look for details.
Write your answers, using specific evidence from the text to support your thinking.
1. In the first line of the poem, Ha says, “Wishes I keep to myself.” What can you infer about Ha’s
character based on this phrase?
I infer that Ha likes to keep important thoughts and feelings to herself, and does not
feel like she can share what is going on with her family. She says she keeps her
“wishes” “to myself.” Later in the poem she says she wishes she could do “what boys
do,” so she probably feels like she can’t talk to her brothers. And then she says she
wants to let her hair grow, but “mother says” no.
2. In the sixth stanza of the poem, Ha says,
“Wish Mother would stop
chiding me to stay calm,
which makes it worse.”
Part A: What do you think the word chiding means in this context?
Telling me in a mean way, scolding.
Part B: What evidence in the text helped you figure this out?
Ha says, “I wish I could stay calm” when her brothers tease her, and then
says that her mother “makes it worse,” which makes me think she feels hassled by
her mother.
And she says her mother has a “permanent frown,” so I know chiding is probably
something negative.
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Mid-Unit 1 Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
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3. In stanza 8, Ha writes, “Wish Father would come home.” What two reasons does Ha give for this
wish? Cite specific details from the text to support your answer.
(Note that there are several options for appropriate evidence in stanzas 8 and 9.)
The first reason she wants him to come home is so he can come to her class, and
she can show him to her classmates. She says she wants “all her classmates to see.”
The second reason she wants him to come home is so her mom will be happy and
stop worrying. She says she wants him to lift the “permanent frown” from her
mom’s face.
4. Ha writes of seven wishes.
Part A: Based on these seven wishes, and other things you know about Ha, which of the following
best describes her character?
a. She selfishly wishes for things to make her happy.
b. She is a complex character who wishes for both childlike and serious things.
c. Her wishes show that she wants to please others.
d. She is unrealistic and just wishes for impossible things.
Part B: Cite specific details from the text to support your answer in Question 4, Part A.
(Note that there are several possible responses; a strong response would include
and explain evidence for both childlike and serious.)
Ha wishes for somewhat fun things that kids want, like wanting to “jump rope” and
“sew doll clothes.” But she also wishes she could have a sister, and wishes “father
would come home,” which are much more serious wishes.
GRADE 8: MODULE 1: UNIT 1: LESSON 5
Mid-Unit 1 Assessment:
Getting to Know a Character:
What Details in the Text Help Us Understand Ha?
(Answers for Teacher Reference)
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5.
Who is Ha? Based on this poem, “Birthday Wishes,” and one other poem you have read so far in
the novel, describe Ha as a character: her traits, values, or beliefs. Write a paragraph in which you
explain your current understanding of Ha, using specific evidence from the text of both poems to
support your analysis. You may use your journal, your book, QuickWrite 1, and the “Who Is Ha?”
Anchor Charts posted in the room to support your answer. Be sure to indicate the title of the
second poem (as well as any other poems you choose) in your response.
Answer the prompt completely
Provide relevant and complete evidence
Paragraph includes the following:
* A focus statement
* At least three pieces of specific evidence from the text
* For each piece of evidence, an analysis or explanation: what does this evidence mean?
* A concluding sentence
Ha is a 10-year-old girl who wants to feel close to her family but instead feels very
alone. She has three older brothers, but does not really play with them or feel close
to them. In the poem “Kim Hà,” she says her brothers tease her, calling her names
like “River Horse.” She says she “can’t make her brothers go live elsewhere,” which
makes me think she wants to be separate from them. But then in “Birthday Wishes,”
she says she “wishes she could do what boys do.” It’s like she wants to be close to
them but at the same time she doesn’t, so she pushes them away. It’s the same with
her mom. In “Kim Hà,” she says she still “loves being near her mother” and is always
just “three steps away.” But then in “Birthday Wishes,” Ha says she wishes her
mother wouldn’t “chide her,” and doesn’t talk about feeling close to her at all. I think
she wants to be close to her family but doesn’t know how.
GRADE 8: MODULE 1: UNIT 1: LESSON 5
2 Point Rubric:
Writing From Sources/Short Response
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2-point Response
The features of a 2-point response are:
Valid inferences and/or claims from the text where required by the
prompt
Evidence of analysis of the text where required by the prompt
Relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, and/or other information
from the text to develop response according to the requirements of the
prompt
Sufficient number of facts, definitions, concrete details, and/or other
information from the text as required by the prompt
Complete sentences where errors do not impact readability
1-point Response
The features of a 1-point response are:
A mostly literal recounting of events or details from the text as required
by the prompt
Some relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, and/or other
information from the text to develop response according to the
requirements of the prompt
Incomplete sentences or bullets
0-point Response
The features of a 0-point response are:
A response that does not address any of the requirements of the
prompt or is totally inaccurate
No response (blank answer)
A response that is not written in English
A response that is unintelligible or indecipherable
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OPTIONAL MATERIALS
Lesson Vocabulary Guides
Word
Definition
historical fiction
*#
a made-up, or imagined, story that is based on real events
evidence
*+
words, phrases, and details from the text
* Words that will be important again in Common Core classes
+ Repeated from earlier in the unit
# Supporting activity available for this word at the end of lesson 6
Additional Words from Assigned Reading
Word
Page
Definition
justify 25 prove to be right
flaunts 25 shows off
conviction 25 strong belief
grid (v) 30 cross over
chiding 30 finding fault with, showing disapproval
extending 31 reaching out
cyclo 32 a three-wheeled bicycle taxi
crescent 32 the curved shape of a thin moon
podium 34 a platform on which a person might stand to be seen by others
wrung 37 squeezed
scold 38 find fault with, show disapproval